Writing is not useless. It is a method of preserving information.
(The next bit, well, they pause. Their headflaps ripple. They headtilt.
...They aren't entirely scentless. They carry the scents of the dirt and blood of alien worlds, as well as a general sort of slightly warm plastic smell.
More notable, however, is the fact that they have a massive hole in their chest. It's literally big enough that Yellowfang could climb up into it if she wanted. Not that they'd actually let her if she tried, but it's physically possible. The jagged, irregular edges should probably make it clear that the hole wasn't intended to be there: it was a really impressive weapon that made that.
But more importantly what the fuck they're not a car.)
Error: you are describing attributes of "cars". We are not a car.
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(The next bit, well, they pause. Their headflaps ripple. They headtilt.
...They aren't entirely scentless. They carry the scents of the dirt and blood of alien worlds, as well as a general sort of slightly warm plastic smell.
More notable, however, is the fact that they have a massive hole in their chest. It's literally big enough that Yellowfang could climb up into it if she wanted. Not that they'd actually let her if she tried, but it's physically possible. The jagged, irregular edges should probably make it clear that the hole wasn't intended to be there: it was a really impressive weapon that made that.
But more importantly what the fuck they're not a car.)
Error: you are describing attributes of "cars". We are not a car.